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by Electric Cero
Mon Jan 29, 2018 2:07 am
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Can Someone Make This Better?
Replies: 12
Views: 1228

Re: Can Someone Make This Better?

After receiving some helpful information from TheNoobHunter, I went and finished v7.

Here it is...
v7.ftm
(3.64 KiB) Downloaded 40 times
...Tada!
by Electric Cero
Sun Jan 28, 2018 11:38 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Can Someone Make This Better?
Replies: 12
Views: 1228

Re: Can Someone Make This Better?

V6 definitely sounds better, but the amount of repetition and dissonant tones kinda ruins the song for me. I'd say pick a scale and stick to it. I think it would sound better if it had more of a melody as well. It sounds like it's leading up to one but never really goes anywhere Thank you for the f...
by Electric Cero
Sat Jan 20, 2018 10:13 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Can Someone Make This Better?
Replies: 12
Views: 1228

Re: Can Someone Make This Better?

Well, it's not much of an improvement. But I think V6 sounds more like a title theme.
by Electric Cero
Tue Jan 09, 2018 1:34 am
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Can Someone Make This Better?
Replies: 12
Views: 1228

Re: Can Someone Make This Better?

Mega Bruh X wrote:Sorry about that. You can get newer version here: viewtopic.php?f=4&t=173

Thanks for your help, Mega Bruh. :) I like your edit btw, it sounds like it could be a city stage. Like Streets of Rage or something similar.
by Electric Cero
Mon Jan 08, 2018 10:23 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Can Someone Make This Better?
Replies: 12
Views: 1228

Re: Can Someone Make This Better?

Hmm, this isn't bad for your first song (mime was complete trash)! I like the tone you got going there, it sounds like the intro to a cool boss theme. Some advice I can give is to learn a bit of music theory. That will not only make your songs sound better, but will also help you create new ones! D...
by Electric Cero
Sun Jan 07, 2018 8:34 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Can Someone Make This Better?
Replies: 12
Views: 1228

Can Someone Make This Better?

I have finally made a short motif using FamiTracker :lol: . It's my first song so I still have a lot to learn and, I would appreciate some feedback. (and hopefully a better version of the song!) v5.ftm And here is a link to the same song but in beepbox with minor changes. https://goo.gl/9VGuxr

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