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by arethere
Mon Oct 15, 2018 10:49 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Blush
Replies: 2
Views: 223

Re: Blush

Your custom VRC7 instrument is off by a 5th. This means the note that is being displayed is not the one we are hearing. You can fix this by changing the Mult.factor. About the song: I like the change in frame 06. I like the bass pattern idea. Some articulations like staccato could make it even bette...
by arethere
Wed Sep 26, 2018 8:15 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: T-T-T (Twisted Train Trip)
Replies: 1
Views: 258

Re: T-T-T (Twisted Train Trip)

Not bad, not bad. I like what I've heard from you so far in general. To me it sounds like you are treating Famitracker like an orchestra if that makes sense. I just get a classical vibe from your compositions. You don't feel like following more contemporary simple song structure. At least that's my ...
by arethere
Mon Sep 10, 2018 2:12 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Rush
Replies: 6
Views: 1437

Re: Rush

I like seventh chords. Seems like you are heading in a good direction with making music as far as I am concerned. I don't think it was uninteresting. Frame 3 was a nice change of instrumentation. That said, I am not sure some of the dissonances are intentional. For example in frame 05 you have a pre...
by arethere
Mon May 21, 2018 2:21 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Made an EP
Replies: 5
Views: 719

Re: Made an EP

I listened to your EP and I liked your song salamander so I decided to edit the ftm
Percussion, Bass, effects such as echo/reverb and vibrato and adjusting volume levels (you usually don't go over D in VRC7) can bring out a lot i think
by arethere
Mon May 21, 2018 4:37 am
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Need help with lead
Replies: 1
Views: 334

Re: Need help with lead

I felt like this has a solid structure in a way, a foundation for a song ...but there were a few things that bugged me The lead and some other parts really are a bit weird in how they are playing off the chord or superimposing a different chord. Somehow this isn't even so bad but unless you want to ...
by arethere
Mon May 21, 2018 2:02 am
Forum: Original Music
Topic: I have no IDEAS
Replies: 4
Views: 511

Re: I have no IDEAS

Well, don't beat yourself up over not having any ideas if that is what's happening here...
Your Song Forest Swing is awesome by the way
by arethere
Sun May 20, 2018 11:02 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: run of the cricket (2A03)
Replies: 1
Views: 456

run of the cricket (2A03)

Hello friends, This song is inspired by the Shantae Gameboy OST i listened to the other day. Some issues I have with it: - The melodies are pretty random and not memorable - The structure and everything is very block-ish (essentially just 2 sections on repeat) - I didn't make Triangle sound like a g...
by arethere
Tue Nov 29, 2016 11:03 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Wat boss edited[2a03]
Replies: 1
Views: 368

Re: Wat boss edited[2a03]

I think the main problem with the original was that everything was detuned so weirdly, the melody isn't so bad
I made my own version of it for fun
BETA IM SO SORRY
by arethere
Tue Nov 29, 2016 9:28 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: How do you feel about this?
Replies: 2
Views: 437

Re: How do you feel about this?

I am not familiar with Super Metroid's music... but this is alright for setting an unsettling atmosphere, I don't think it's annoying at all it's just very bare-bones, maybe you could add some noise effect stuff and echos or something? maybe it's supposed to be this way? it just seems a bit empty to...
by arethere
Tue Nov 29, 2016 9:22 pm
Forum: Original Music
Topic: Small imaginary cat game ost [beta]
Replies: 5
Views: 770

Re: Small imaginary cat game ost

welcome to the forum :) I like the composition, the melodies are very nice... well everything is! everything works well together simple but effective which brings me to my next point the instrumentation is relatively simple (it goes without saying that it's obviously more than very good for a first ...

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