FamiTracker

Your transition from Frame 3 to 4 is very dry and Instrument 08 abruptly stops when I feel like it shouldn't. In my opinion, you could rectify this with a fast volume decay in the instrument. It's a good start.

There's a whole bunch of stuff that sounds okay, but my main gripe is in Instrument 10, which you have its volume sliding in, which in turn makes the track feel like it's off by a small amount. You also have an arpeggio in that same instrument that really bothers me. In addition to this, slow down w...

Some unfinished things I've made in the span of three days, I think. It makes sense to critique the first one, since that's the one that's finished.

This was a thing that was in my hard drive for a while. Spruced it up a bit and removed some rough edges.

Made in about an hour. I should've had my headphones on while doing so. It sounds atrocious, please, dear god, someone fix this...

I had no idea where to take this. Critiques welcome...I guess...

This was amazingly orgasmic.
Really impressed on that high caliber distortion guitar.

The one thing that really gets me is the volume parameters on the Triangle column. Can't do that. I'm serious. It doesn't work that way. The triangle column's sound is hardwired to always stay the same volume. At frame 06, it starts to turn into noise. The melody becomes odd and indescribable, unles...

It's been a good two years ever since I posted something, so here it is. I'm breaking the streak.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/15Runu1 ... sp=sharing

arethere wrote:if you have no interest in music or receiving criticism what is the point of this thread
do you want other people to make your music for you? if so, at least outright say it

And I gave him legitimate advice. Feel like I wasted my time. Thread truly is un-salvagable.