Why Not? [MMC5]

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Why Not? [MMC5]

Postby drdevil » Sat Nov 07, 2015 9:59 pm

Here's a little tune I made. It has a bit of a Latin feel. I originally titled it "Chilled Girl", but that name eventually became unfitting. I though "Why Not?" was a good name for the track.

Hopefully, I didn't knick parts of the tune from somewhere without realising. That would just be my luck, lol.

So... I hope you like it! If there is anything to criticise, GO ahead!

EDIT: Scroll down for updated version.
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Re: Why Not? [MMC5]

Postby Tobikomi » Sun Nov 08, 2015 4:35 am

This sounds very cartoon-y, and it has that salsa-feel to it. I love this! Keep it up!
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Re: Why Not? [MMC5]

Postby Sky Yoshi » Sun Nov 08, 2015 7:13 am

It feels like I'm playing another version of Adventure Island! (or 高橋名人の冒険島 in Japanese...) (^ω^)
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Re: Why Not? [MMC5]

Postby drdevil » Sun Nov 08, 2015 3:09 pm

I'm glad you two like it! :D

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Re: Why Not? [MMC5]

Postby iYamWhatIYam » Sun Nov 08, 2015 3:33 pm

It's loud, but other than that, it's cool!
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Re: Why Not? [MMC5]

Postby drdevil » Sun Nov 08, 2015 5:44 pm

iYamWhatIYam wrote:It's loud, but other than that, it's cool!


Haha, thanks. I guess the leads are too loud because of my speakers (my laptop isn't working properly, so I'm using a different computer and nothing comes out of the earphones).

Regardless, I've turned the leads down slightly. I also improved other things, such as the 'reverb' and I added a reverse cymbal at one of the sections.
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Re: Why Not? [MMC5]

Postby iYamWhatIYam » Sun Nov 08, 2015 9:21 pm

Much better. This is nicer on the ears.
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Re: Why Not? [MMC5]

Postby Sky Yoshi » Thu Nov 12, 2015 1:15 pm

Much Better!
Keep up the good work!
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