[VRC6] That Girl With Red Hair

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[VRC6] That Girl With Red Hair

Postby Gors » Thu Nov 12, 2015 3:13 am

I'm finally back from artist's block!!

I made this track, let's see what you people think
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Re: [VRC6] That Girl With Red Hair

Postby Livoh773 » Thu Nov 12, 2015 4:43 am

Error on frame 3C? ( Bxx effect)

I always like your songs, a lot, glad you are back!

I sense the composition part is really really well done, but the instrumentation gets a bit messy, ... or something (maybe its the module limitations..) Lets see what others think as I'm not that experienced yet

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Re: [VRC6] That Girl With Red Hair

Postby TheMudkipMaster12 » Thu Nov 12, 2015 6:52 am

Glad you're back! I love your work, and this is no exception. :) The only thing I would fix is the volume mixing, everything is kinda the same through the whole song.
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Re: [VRC6] That Girl With Red Hair

Postby Gors » Thu Nov 12, 2015 11:28 am

That's not an error on 3C, I made it so I could use a fadeout effect on Audacity :P

I'll work on volume mixing on some parts!

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Re: [VRC6] That Girl With Red Hair

Postby drdevil » Thu Nov 12, 2015 8:35 pm

Love how catchy and funky this is! Personally, I'd say the crash sounds need a bit more work, though.