Helios Laboratory(2A03)

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GlidingSoul
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Helios Laboratory(2A03)

Postby GlidingSoul » Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:42 am

A little tune I just made. Enjoy!
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Re: Helios Laboratory(2A03)

Postby TheMudkipMaster12 » Sun Nov 22, 2015 7:17 am

This is pretty nice! I love the melody at the start of the song, but the end it's a bit random imo (Last 2 frames).
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Re: Helios Laboratory(2A03)

Postby Shywolf » Sun Nov 22, 2015 5:08 pm

The Kirby feel in this is very nice, but the last frame feels unfinished and doesn't loop back to start very cleanly...

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Re: Helios Laboratory(2A03)

Postby GlidingSoul » Mon Nov 23, 2015 5:38 pm

I tried to fix the last frames so the song loops more naturally.
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