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kfaraday
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hello

Postby kfaraday » Mon May 18, 2015 9:24 pm

i got a lot of ftms on my computer so i am posting them here. if u got a request u can ask for one of those if i have it as well. ok Here Go It
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antmusik.ftm
good song i made that sounds like ants
(12.26 KiB) Downloaded 218 times
actionclassical8.ftm
fearofdark collab
(146.24 KiB) Downloaded 178 times
jrlepage.ftm
funny loop i made about jrlepage
(6.91 KiB) Downloaded 174 times
spice bros.ftm
this ohb turned out pretty well
(25.75 KiB) Downloaded 194 times
WAFFLEMONSTERISAFOOT.ftm
& this one
(21.78 KiB) Downloaded 148 times

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MiniMacro
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Re: hello

Postby MiniMacro » Tue May 19, 2015 11:05 pm

ok, here goes:
Antmuzik- No, no, no, no, no. This sounds like something that iGot_noscope would make. It is very random and not good at all.
ActionClassical8- The first 5 frames got me disappointed but then the rest was actually very catchy and well made! Nice one!
jrlepage- Pretty catchy and great quality, however, I fail to see how it's about jrlepage.
Spice Bros.- Awesome! Could be in an actual NES game!
WAFFLEMONSTERISAFOOT- It's alright, but it could use a huge improvement in making it a bit less random.
Overall, pretty good songs. :)
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wow this is total BS
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Re: hello

Postby jrlepage » Tue May 19, 2015 11:13 pm

I like my eponymous loop. Kinda suits me I guess.

MiniMacro wrote:Overall, you're off to a good start. Keep practicing! :)

>kfaraday
>good "start"
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kfaraday
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Re: hello

Postby kfaraday » Tue May 19, 2015 11:19 pm

i am very nnew to the famitackrer. :~)

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Re: hello

Postby YobaHere » Tue May 19, 2015 11:25 pm

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If anybody knows where i can download FMPSG albums please let me know.
Here is my youcloud and twitterbook. Whatever. Shitmusics.
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Project
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Re: hello

Postby Project » Tue May 19, 2015 11:27 pm

Wow. These are very advanced in the technical department. Now you just need to work on the musicality of them.

But if you were going for chaotic music exactly like this, well. done.

Some of it also reminds me of Renard from its chaos.

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Re: hello

Postby MiniMacro » Tue May 19, 2015 11:31 pm

jrlepage wrote:>kfaraday
>good "start"


Was (s)he on the old forums?
wow this is total BS
mmsound.bandcamp.com
you can see my beautiful music there~

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Re: hello

Postby jrlepage » Tue May 19, 2015 11:34 pm

Let's just say kfaraday's resumé is beyond a good start.
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MiniMacro
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Re: hello

Postby MiniMacro » Tue May 19, 2015 11:37 pm

Oh, wow, kfaraday is great.
wow this is total BS
mmsound.bandcamp.com
you can see my beautiful music there~

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Re: hello

Postby MechaGrapefruit » Tue May 19, 2015 11:58 pm

At least a few times in WAFFLEMONSTERISAFOOT (amazing name), you place the V effect in the triangle column, but you can't actually change the triangle duty cycle. You also utilize the D effect to move on some frames unnecessarily (jrlepage has them at the end of every frame, when the frame would naturally move on at the same place). Technically these are awesome, especially actionclassical8, but as a few above have stated, others lack a bit of melodic direction and are busy (particularly antmusik, spice bros, and the aforementioned WAFFLEMONSTER).
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