Depths of Basement [BETA]

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Depths of Basement [BETA]

Postby Tobikomi » Wed Dec 16, 2015 2:57 am

Just a small tune I wrote, nothing special. Except, that this song is based off of my childhood adventures where I explored my creepy basement, ahhh good times! :lol: Enjoy!
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Re: Depths of Basement [BETA]

Postby MiniMacro » Wed Dec 16, 2015 12:22 pm

You must have a pretty strange basement...
This is a really good tune. Only thing I don't like is that it's so repetitive. Maybe a bit more pulse usage would help.
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Re: Depths of Basement [BETA]

Postby Tobikomi » Thu Dec 17, 2015 1:41 pm

MiniMacro wrote:You must have a pretty strange basement...
This is a really good tune. Only thing I don't like is that it's so repetitive. Maybe a bit more pulse usage would help.

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Re: Depths of Basement [BETA]

Postby Sky Yoshi » Thu Dec 17, 2015 1:55 pm

TOM AND JERRY!?
DOn't you believen!
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Re: Depths of Basement [BETA]

Postby Tobikomi » Thu Dec 17, 2015 8:47 pm

Sky Yoshi wrote:TOM AND JERRY!?
DOn't you believen!
ROLF LMAO

Teehee! It's, "Don't you believe it!" :D I love to add samples to my compositions. ;)
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Re: Depths of Basement [BETA]

Postby James_S » Thu Dec 17, 2015 11:17 pm

im actually a fan of this piece, and i dont think that repetitiveness was too big of an issue here. nice job!
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Re: Depths of Basement [BETA]

Postby ollaxe » Thu Dec 17, 2015 11:41 pm

This sounds pretty interesting. It really captures that feel of some sort of underground or basement. I agree with James that the repetitiveness isn't too big of an issue.

Good job on this!
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Re: Depths of Basement [BETA]

Postby decomposinghorse » Fri Dec 18, 2015 12:02 am

better than the sounds of people eating money (money ! wow!!!) at a dining hall, played through a pair of gourmet headphones

you've won. !

very good use of dpcm

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Re: Depths of Basement [BETA]

Postby Tobikomi » Fri Dec 18, 2015 8:53 pm

Thanks for the comments!
ぼくのなまえはブライアン(とびこみ)だ。はじめまして!
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Re: Depths of Basement [BETA]

Postby Sky Yoshi » Sat Dec 19, 2015 11:02 am

Looping the track 0B is really funny.
you guys should try it.
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