No-name WIP (Criticism Please!)

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No-name WIP (Criticism Please!)

Postby Neonchiptune » Mon Dec 21, 2015 5:16 am

This one's been a tough one ever since I've started workin' on it.

The main problems I've been having with this module are the Chords and especially the title of this song.
The emotion i'm trying to captivate here is a winter urban life (?) setting so any titles pertaining to this would be nice as reference.

I'm pressed for time in terms of making this as I plan on finishing this by the end of December.

Aside from that I hope you enjoy the work so far. Criticism is widely accepted!!
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Re: No-name WIP (Criticism Please!)

Postby Tobikomi » Tue Dec 22, 2015 2:19 am

This is good! Although, I would question about the C00 command in Frame 08. If this composition is based off of winter, I would name it something that is synonymous to it. Again, nice job as always!
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Re: No-name WIP (Criticism Please!)

Postby Neonchiptune » Tue Dec 22, 2015 8:52 am

Tobikomi wrote:Although, I would question about the C00 command in Frame 08

Ah, this is just the end of the current WIP. Although there is extra content in the next frames, it won't come into play until later.
Glad you like it!

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Re: No-name WIP (Criticism Please!)

Postby Neonchiptune » Sat Jan 16, 2016 9:58 pm

Small Bump here.
Here's the finished track. Hope you like it.
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Re: No-name WIP (Criticism Please!)

Postby BioMechanicalDude » Sat Jan 16, 2016 10:12 pm

A very beautiful song, indeed! I think it really captures the feeling of winter and all the emotions, that come with it. It really brings up images of snowy areas and whatnot. I don't see anything wrong with it yet. Good job!
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Re: No-name WIP (Criticism Please!)

Postby TheMudkipMaster12 » Sun Jan 17, 2016 8:03 am

Wow, this is a very beautiful song, I really like this! One thing to note, starting on frame 1A, you have A and 5 volume effects on triangle. Not sure if it was lazy copy/pasting or you intentionally put them there.
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Re: No-name WIP (Criticism Please!)

Postby Neonchiptune » Thu Jan 21, 2016 6:27 am

TheMudkipMaster12 wrote:Wow, this is a very beautiful song, I really like this! One thing to note, starting on frame 1A, you have A and 5 volume effects on triangle. Not sure if it was lazy copy/pasting or you intentionally put them there.

I was very rushed for time due to the fact that I had to enter this into a compilation album (Which I may share here once it drops, but we'll see)
in which case, I had to resort to the notorious Ctrl+C and Ctrl+V...

Despite this, I'm just glad you enjoyed the track. Thanks!

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Re: No-name WIP (Criticism Please!)

Postby lamsorz » Thu Jan 21, 2016 5:05 pm

Holy hell, this was amazing. I really love soft and powerful tracks like this, hits it where it counts for me. Good luck with your album, m8, sure it's gonna be amazing.

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Re: No-name WIP (Criticism Please!)

Postby Neonchiptune » Thu Jan 21, 2016 11:33 pm

lamsorz wrote:Holy hell, this was amazing. I really love soft and powerful tracks like this, hits it where it counts for me. Good luck with your album, m8, sure it's gonna be amazing.

Really glad you think so! Thanks for listening.
Anyways, I should clarify that it won't be my album, exactly.

It'll be a 2015 compilation album by https://soundcloud.com/imaginary-chipmusic that should be released around the end of this January or so.
Again, we'll have to wait and see. I'll have to ask if I can share it here as well.