[2A03] Traveler's Lament

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[2A03] Traveler's Lament

Postby Bramble » Wed May 18, 2016 6:15 pm

Hey everyone! Finally another original song! I just came up with this last night and did a bit more work on it this morning. It kind of gives me a 'game over' sort of vibe, and I decided to roll with that when making the second section of the song. It's pretty simple but I think it turned out ok! Let me know what you think, and thanks for listening!
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Re: [2A03] Traveler's Lament

Postby Torowin » Tue May 24, 2016 6:46 am

very solid track, I could definitely hear this in an indie game.
it has a nice structure, the instrumentation and mix is great.
the only thing i think you could improve on is some more melodic and rhythmic flourishing, i figure you were going for the simplistic/minimalistic feel, and it works, but this could use just a little more spice to push it into a really great song.
Keep it up! :D