Sad Coffee (VCR7)

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Sad Coffee (VCR7)

Postby LokiStriker » Mon Jun 06, 2016 8:27 pm

Another song I made for fun, this one also was build around something I made on guitar,
Theres a main theme that repeats in the whole song and the rest of the song gets builds around it.

The name of the song is an image I got composing the original song, a sad man drinking coffee, a sad coffee,
but once I decided the drums I did on the song felt a different kind of sad, like a post-war theme of a calm man.
The rattle is supposed to emulate a fast picking guitar, the rest of the instruments are pretty standart.

Hope you enjoy, open to criticism, or if you feel like remixing.
You always knew my weak spot, and you knew my breaking point...
Oh... how you loved to kill me...

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Re: Sad Coffee (VCR7)

Postby Torowin » Wed Jun 08, 2016 7:53 am

OH YEA that's what i'm talkin' bout', back at it again. Awesome chord progresh! :)
The melody in this is great. The little pitch drops at the end of certain phrases give it so much life. A really sad life that is. Someone who's stuck inside a dark lil coffee shop all day.