Urgent Call (2A03)

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Urgent Call (2A03)

Postby Jir-0 » Sun Aug 28, 2016 3:14 am

Uh, I tried to make an intro stage-esque theme.
I need criticism on this, as I'm trying to be more comfortable with composing.

This is mostly inspired from Mega Man and Shadow of the Ninja/Kage.
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Re: Urgent Call (2A03)

Postby Doc2211 » Sun Aug 28, 2016 3:24 am

Sounds great! I feel like there should be 2 frames of filler before the big change between frames 06 and 07, because it sorta throws off the rhythm
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Re: Urgent Call (2A03)

Postby Jir-0 » Sun Aug 28, 2016 4:12 am

Ah, thanks for your input!
I added two more frames between frames 06 and 07, so hopefully that will do.

I also edited the intro in frame 00.
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Re: Urgent Call (2A03)

Postby Doc2211 » Sun Aug 28, 2016 2:51 pm

Jir-0 wrote:Ah, thanks for your input!
I added two more frames between frames 06 and 07, so hopefully that will do.

I also edited the intro in frame 00.


Sounds a lot better!
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