Persistence (MMC5) [0.5 BETA]

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footprints420
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Persistence (MMC5) [0.5 BETA]

Postby footprints420 » Fri Sep 23, 2016 5:35 pm

It's been a while since i posted here. This song was a bit difficult to balance, so if anything sounds off to you, let me know!
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Last edited by footprints420 on Fri Sep 23, 2016 6:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Persistence (MMC5) [0.5 BETA]

Postby Tobikomi » Fri Sep 23, 2016 5:56 pm

This is amazing! I couldn't find anything that wasn't balanced, but I do feel that you could tweak the volume a little more.
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Re: Persistence (MMC5) [0.5 BETA]

Postby LokiStriker » Fri Sep 23, 2016 5:57 pm

I love this, I dont know what else can I say...
Good job mate
You always knew my weak spot, and you knew my breaking point...
Oh... how you loved to kill me...


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Re: Persistence (MMC5) [0.5 BETA]

Postby footprints420 » Fri Sep 23, 2016 6:06 pm

Thanks, guys! Any specific examples, Tobi?
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Re: Persistence (MMC5) [0.5 BETA]

Postby Tobikomi » Fri Sep 23, 2016 6:21 pm

Well, I felt that the arpeggios from Frame 12 to Frame 15 are a bit loud.
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Re: Persistence (MMC5) [0.5 BETA]

Postby MegaByte » Fri Sep 23, 2016 8:52 pm

This is flippin' amazing!
Heheh funny