Red Thread/Jealousy (VCR7) (0.5b)

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LokiStriker
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Red Thread/Jealousy (VCR7) (0.5b)

Postby LokiStriker » Mon Oct 03, 2016 6:38 pm

I have this new song, its been a while since I made something and I wanted to post here, so... there you go...

So the song it has a very simple two chord prog (G#m - C#sus2) going on, but thats kind of the charm of it.
This two chord prog later on becomes a three chord (G#m - C#7 - C#m7) but keeps the same time, splitting the C# chords in half and half time.
The melody its basically me jamming along to the song and then writing it to the FM. Im proud of this one.
As the original title says this came from a feeling of jealousy, tho it was nothing really serious, I captured the feeling and went to recorded.
I decided to change the title as the emotion in the end was more than just that as human emotion is way complexer than just words...

Any kind of feedback is welcomed.
Last edited by LokiStriker on Tue Oct 04, 2016 12:39 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Red Thread/Jealousy (VCR7) (0.5b)

Postby Teuthida » Mon Oct 03, 2016 7:31 pm

Great as usual LS! It has a very Film Noir asthetic. My only issue is that the intro is a little too similar to one of your previous songs, but that's about it.
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Re: Red Thread/Jealousy (VCR7) (0.5b)

Postby LokiStriker » Tue Oct 04, 2016 12:40 am

I reworked the intro (Some of my intros are like that but this one was really close to one so I made it more fancier, but it still has that thing going on... *shrug* *bad poker face*)
and made some little changes so the song would have a better pace (volume and a few notes here and there).
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Re: Red Thread/Jealousy (VCR7) (0.5b)

Postby FloppyDisk » Tue Oct 04, 2016 12:52 am

It has a very Film Noir asthetic.

I can imagine this being in a b/w detective movie.
This is really nice, I especially love that twang at the end.
Don't copy that floppy!

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Re: Red Thread/Jealousy (VCR7) (0.5b)

Postby MegaByte » Wed Oct 05, 2016 6:04 pm

This is amazing! I love it!
Heheh funny

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Re: Red Thread/Jealousy (VCR7) (0.5b)

Postby LokiStriker » Fri Oct 07, 2016 6:53 am

FloppyDisk wrote: I can imagine this being in a b/w detective movie.
This is really nice, I especially love that twang at the end.

I love those twang´s
I might overuse them xD

MegaByte wrote:This is amazing! I love it!

Thank you *bows slightly*
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