(1-N163) Island Walk 1 & 2

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Re: (1-N163) Island Walk 1 & 2

Postby Teuthida » Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:18 am

I'm sorry to say, but these aren't very good. There's a HUGE amount of dissonance on the first one, with tritones and minor second "chords" everywhere. The melody itself is good, but the poor choice in bass just ruins the whole things.
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Re: (1-N163) Island Walk 1 & 2

Postby The Caller » Thu Nov 24, 2016 3:30 pm

I... like them. Both of them.

The melody on both of them is pretty nice, and yes, as Teuthida said, there IS some dissonance, but not enough to bother me.

So kudos to you. Though, you could still make these better.

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Re: (1-N163) Island Walk 1 & 2

Postby Teuthida » Thu Nov 24, 2016 3:36 pm

Hmm... I guess I just have lower tolerance for that kind of stuff than you, The Caller.
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Re: (1-N163) Island Walk 1 & 2

Postby The Caller » Thu Nov 24, 2016 3:50 pm

Maybe you do have lower tolerance, but that's not exactly a bad thing. It serves to show you like things the right way, which is good.

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Re: (1-N163) Island Walk 1 & 2

Postby Quirby64 » Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:13 pm

Thanks for the criticism Teuthida and Caller! \.o./
I tried to change both songs to be better, like changing note and the bass, mostly the first Island Walk.
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Re: (1-N163) Island Walk 1 & 2

Postby The Caller » Thu Nov 24, 2016 6:26 pm

Quirby64 wrote:Thanks for the criticism Teuthida and Caller! \.o./
I tried to change both songs to be better, like changing note and the bass, mostly the first Island Walk.


Ah yes, the first one definitely sounds better now. I still prefer the second one, though.