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Xen
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Original Title Theme

Postby Xen » Wed Nov 30, 2016 7:38 pm

I am fairly new to famitacker so this is Just something I made for fun. Tell me what you think :)
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Rarest_lizard038
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Re: Original Title Theme

Postby Rarest_lizard038 » Wed Nov 30, 2016 10:07 pm

Dang, this is really good! For your first time using famitracker, you are doing amazing!

My only complaint is that it needs a little bit of tweeking more towards the volume. I'd make the main lead a little more quieter and make the first pulse on vrc6 more quiet. Other than that, This is so Good!

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Re: Original Title Theme

Postby LokiStriker » Sun Dec 04, 2016 9:34 pm

Add a fade to the end instead of a cut and its really really great.
Keep making music and post them, this is really great.
(I felt a little Shovel Knight in the song, tho it might had just been me, in the instrument usage, cause the melody stands by itself pretty nicely.)
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Re: Original Title Theme

Postby Modus Ponens » Tue Dec 06, 2016 11:14 am

It looks like you're trying to control the volume of the triangle channel in instrument 04. This won't work, because the triangle channel has no volume control: it can only be on or off. Thus, all non-zero values sound identical in its volume column or the volume macro of an instrument used in the triangle channel. As a result, your bassline isn't as punchy as you might have intended it be, because there's no attack on most of its notes.

Combine this with what these other guys have suggested about volume control and it'll be great! I like how it sounds so far!
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Re: Original Title Theme

Postby MiniMacro » Tue Dec 06, 2016 1:06 pm

this is really good for a first time
most of what i had to say has been said
but i'd suggest changing the tempo to 150 and the speed to 4
wow this is total BS
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Re: Original Title Theme

Postby Xen » Tue Dec 06, 2016 1:57 pm

Thank you everybody for all of the helpful tips and criticism! I will make sure to take all of this into account during future projects. I will post an edited version of the Title Theme utilizing the suggestions given to me here in the near future :)

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Re: Original Title Theme

Postby Joblez_I » Wed Dec 07, 2016 3:16 am

Outside of some issues with audio mixing, this is pretty damn good. Impressive, especially for your first time.
I like the chips and the tunes
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