Devour (SN5B) [BETA]

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Tobikomi
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Devour (SN5B) [BETA]

Postby Tobikomi » Tue Jan 03, 2017 8:26 pm

A boss theme of some sorts. Enjoy!
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ぼくのなまえはブライアン(とびこみ)だ。はじめまして!
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LokiStriker
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Re: Devour (SN5B) [BETA]

Postby LokiStriker » Tue Jan 03, 2017 11:37 pm

Good theme mate!
I get a dark fleshy tech boss in my head as I listen to it.
One thing I have to nitpick about is that in the frames 05 to 08, where the melody is done by the triangle and also the Pulse 1,
gets kinda lost because the volume of the backing chords/notes, make it less noticeable.
You always knew my weak spot, and you knew my breaking point...
Oh... how you loved to kill me...


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ZachJac
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Re: Devour (SN5B) [BETA]

Postby ZachJac » Wed Jan 04, 2017 12:30 am

Going off of what LokiStriker said, I think that maybe the SB5 Pulses 1 and 2 could be lowered just a bit, just to ensure the melody doesn't take a back seat to the rest of the song- but that's really the only complaint I have- This really is a great song!
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