[BETA] [FDS] Birds on a Branch

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Vagous Magus
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[BETA] [FDS] Birds on a Branch

Postby Vagous Magus » Thu Jan 05, 2017 5:49 pm

A little tune I made in about 3-4 hours. I was originally intending to make a song in G but it evovled into G lydian. Constructive critisicm is highly appreciated!
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Re: [BETA] [FDS] Birds on a Branch

Postby FloppyDisk » Fri Jan 06, 2017 12:37 am

I think this is a nice song with a good atmosphere, but I feel like it's rather empty. The bass from frame 04 is really boring. I get what you're going for, I just think it's not too interesting. Frame 0C to 0F however, is really enjoyable to listen to, as well as frames 0F and 10, good job!
One final note, that 2 channel echo is a bit too loud imo.
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Re: [BETA] [FDS] Birds on a Branch

Postby Vagous Magus » Fri Jan 06, 2017 11:52 am

Alright, I'll remember that for the next time I do something similar. Echoing is still pretty new to me so I appreciate the input on that. I felt like the bass was really strong and that I didn't want to overuse the bass-y sound as I believe that would be annoying. Cheers!