Condolences of a Computer (2A03) [BETA]

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Tobikomi
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Condolences of a Computer (2A03) [BETA]

Postby Tobikomi » Sat Feb 18, 2017 7:42 pm

If Rob Hubbard can create his own DPCM bass, then so can I!
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ぼくのなまえはブライアン(とびこみ)だ。はじめまして!
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Re: Condolences of a Computer (2A03) [BETA]

Postby LokiStriker » Sat Feb 18, 2017 7:51 pm

I like the feel of this song, And tho there are some disonant notes thrown in there in good use, in the beeping section, feels a little too much. Might be just personal taste.

But it does catches a slow feeling like the title indicates.
For just 2A03, its very well done and that bass makes it very full sounding, which is a problem I have on 2A03 myself.
So good job mate!
You always knew my weak spot, and you knew my breaking point...
Oh... how you loved to kill me...


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Re: Condolences of a Computer (2A03) [BETA]

Postby Shywolf » Mon Feb 20, 2017 2:13 am

The off-key notes bug me, but I get that it's supposed to have a "computer-y" feel. Not a bad tune, overall.

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Re: Condolences of a Computer (2A03) [BETA]

Postby lamsorz » Mon Feb 20, 2017 4:17 am

Tasty tune here, man. The wave you're using in the dpcm makes it sound really full. The only things that bug me about this track are the melody not matching the surrounding chord at some spots (changing the "computer piano" notes from B to the melody's C would perfectly fix it) and the triangle lead detuning on the higher notes (pattern 04 used in frames like 06 and so on). Keep it up though, really nice stuff!


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