"All The Yes" WIP

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MiniMacro
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"All The Yes" WIP

Postby MiniMacro » Tue Jun 16, 2015 9:54 pm

Here's a new song I'm working on.
BTW, is it okay to post WIPs here?
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Re: "All The Yes" WIP

Postby Tobikomi » Tue Jun 16, 2015 10:39 pm

I think you should think about using volume in your instruments, just a heads up for you. Don't just use blank instruments, give them some effects like vibrato, sustain, envelope, but mostly volume.
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Re: "All The Yes" WIP

Postby jaxcheese » Wed Jun 17, 2015 12:52 am

The Bs in frame 04 and 05 are pretty uncomfortable in this key. I guess you're getting some more interesting melodic ideas, though.
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Re: "All The Yes" WIP

Postby MiniMacro » Thu Jun 18, 2015 12:17 pm

Alrighty, here's an update!
-Different drums
-A speed change
-Some extra volume changes
-Some drum track changes
-Fixed note on a frame


STORY: I made this song on Tuesday because school finally finished! Yay!
That's why this song is called "All The Yes."
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Re: "All The Yes" WIP

Postby Roflo » Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:18 pm

The long note on pulse 1 in frame 4 and 5 might also need some volume envelope ;)

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Re: "All The Yes" WIP

Postby Tromino » Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:28 pm

Gooed instruments are gooed.
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