The Pile [VRC6]

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The Caller
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The Pile [VRC6]

Postby The Caller » Sun Jul 16, 2017 4:36 am

Just a short song I composed for a character of mine. It's supposed to be somewhat sad and forbidding.

Feedback is welcome.
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Re: The Pile [VRC6]

Postby Tobikomi » Wed Jul 19, 2017 2:53 am

This has some nice/weird tempo going on here! I like it!
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Re: The Pile [VRC6]

Postby Teuthida » Wed Jul 19, 2017 3:50 am

My only problem is that the melody is really hard to hear. Try turning it up a little.
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Re: The Pile [VRC6]

Postby The Caller » Wed Jul 19, 2017 4:44 am

Teuthida wrote:My only problem is that the melody is really hard to hear. Try turning it up a little.


Hmm yeah, the other channels are really empowering over the melody. I might turn it up a bit. Emphasis on 'might', because I'm a lazy piece of sh*t.

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Re: The Pile [VRC6]

Postby The Caller » Wed Jul 19, 2017 4:45 am

Tobikomi wrote:This has some nice/weird tempo going on here! I like it!


Arigatou, Tobi.

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Re: The Pile [VRC6]

Postby Magdiel » Sun Jul 23, 2017 4:55 pm

I, like, cannot complain about your work, okay? Seriously stop it, you're making me jealous at this point.

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Re: The Pile [VRC6]

Postby The Caller » Tue Jul 25, 2017 1:59 pm

Magdiel wrote:I, like, cannot complain about your work, okay? Seriously stop it, you're making me jealous at this point.


Aw you, cut it off, you silly. It's not even that good :3


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