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H_Mister
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Pursuit

Postby H_Mister » Thu Aug 24, 2017 10:42 am

Just a song I made in a few weeks. I feel its a bit too simple. I hope you like it
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Teuthida
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Re: Pursuit

Postby Teuthida » Thu Aug 24, 2017 1:01 pm

Hey, this isn't bad at all! It has some pretty good Mega Man instrumentation. To me, part of your problem is that the pulse waves are poorly mixed and are almost always playing at full volume. This makes the triangle difficult to hear, hurting the intro section. Because the triangle is so quiet, you don't get any of the bass motion that would have made that part less boring. Other than that, the melody could probably use a few tune-ups to sound a little more interesting. All in all, nice job!

I'm sorry if this post is a little incoherent; I was very tired as I typed it.

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The Caller
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Re: Pursuit

Postby The Caller » Thu Aug 24, 2017 4:47 pm

This is prime example on how to do Mega Man styled music right. I have nothing more to say.

Very good job.

Kwalla
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Re: Pursuit

Postby Kwalla » Sun Sep 03, 2017 1:23 pm

Very nice I learned something from this.


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