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MiniMacro
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Super Quest

Postby MiniMacro » Tue Jun 23, 2015 6:27 pm

I tried to make something that sounds like a song from an RPG.
Here it is.
EDIT: Oh crap shoot no I attached the wrong file
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Re: Super Quest

Postby TheMudkipMaster12 » Tue Jun 23, 2015 6:47 pm

I can see you're definitely improving! I like the beginning and the drums, but the triangle channel clashes with pulse 1 which isn't good. Keep up the good work!
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Re: Super Quest

Postby MiniMacro » Tue Jun 23, 2015 6:54 pm

Thank you!
Yeah, the triangle was my attempt to make it less repetitive, but I couldn't come up with a good time to complement the melody.
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Re: Super Quest

Postby MiniMacro » Tue Jun 23, 2015 7:11 pm

updates! yay
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Re: Super Quest

Postby Tromino » Wed Jun 24, 2015 6:08 am

This is actually a lot better than a lot of your old songs! It's not close to perfect, but you are getting better.
One of the problems I see is the volumes of the channels. The drums and triangle are a lot louder than the pulse channels. I think if you made Pulse 1 volume "B" and Pulse 2 "7", and keep noise at "9", it would sound better. Also maybe lowering the Triangle channel by an octave would help.
But still, you're getting better. Keep making songs like this and you'll keep getting better.
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Re: Super Quest

Postby ollaxe » Wed Jun 24, 2015 12:29 pm

You're definitely going in the right direction! Continue this way and you'll eventually become really good.
Hi! I'm not really active here anymore but I still make music. Nowadays I mostly make dubstep with emphasis on good melodies and chord progressions.
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Re: Super Quest

Postby MiniMacro » Wed Jun 24, 2015 1:07 pm

Thank you!
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Re: Super Quest

Postby MiniMacro » Wed Jun 24, 2015 10:46 pm

Improved volume with the help of Tromino
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