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MiniMacro
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YOU CAN'T FIND ME

Postby MiniMacro » Sun Jun 28, 2015 12:24 pm

Yet another new song...
YOU CAN'T FIND ME
DON'T TRY
OR ELSE
YOU DIE


Sincerely,
MiniMacro
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wow this is total BS
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you can see my beautiful music there~

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Re: YOU CAN'T FIND ME

Postby Alexander283 » Sun Jun 28, 2015 1:24 pm

It's not that I can't find you.
It's that I don't want to look for you.

In all seriousness, take a step back and look at it. This track is essentially playing the notes C and C# over and over and over again. No harmonies, musical variety, progression or anything. Just the same note on different octaves. The "Melody" in the triangle later on is doing nothing but going up and down a bit and all in all ... this has pretty much no resemblance to music.
You're telling everone that "you know music theory" and "play an instrument". If you really do, why are our tracks so unbearable to listen to?
As I said time and time again. Do covers. Learn *real* music theory. Please, don't keep pumping turds into this forum. For the love of god ... just ... please.

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Re: YOU CAN'T FIND ME

Postby Roflo » Sun Jun 28, 2015 2:23 pm

But its definitely more listenable than the first things he made ;)

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Re: YOU CAN'T FIND ME

Postby MrKyurem » Sun Jun 28, 2015 2:24 pm

Roflo wrote:But its definitely more listenable than the first things he made ;)


And Pokemon ORAS is better than Pokemon RS, doesn't mean it's worth getting. It just means it's progressive.

While it's nice to see you making progress, you should really consider what Alex has said - you're not really contributing an awful lot.

also it's really nice to not be banned for giving criticism here, unlike scratch

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Re: YOU CAN'T FIND ME

Postby MiniMacro » Sun Jun 28, 2015 2:47 pm

Alex, I do do covers.
I'm working on one right now, in fact.
wow this is total BS
mmsound.bandcamp.com
you can see my beautiful music there~

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Re: YOU CAN'T FIND ME

Postby MrKyurem » Sun Jun 28, 2015 3:25 pm

MiniMacro wrote:Alex, I do do covers.
I'm working on one right now, in fact.


I think what he means is "stick to covers until you get better at writing songs"

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Re: YOU CAN'T FIND ME

Postby Shywolf » Sun Jun 28, 2015 4:04 pm

I liked your N163 attempt better.

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Re: YOU CAN'T FIND ME

Postby ollaxe » Sun Jun 28, 2015 4:14 pm

Not bad, but also not great. I don't really have any new critisism to offer, but you're at least getting better. :)

MrKyurem wrote:also it's really nice to not be banned for giving criticism here, unlike scratch
Did they ban you? /:o Tiny text FTW!!!
Hi! I'm not really active here anymore but I still make music. Nowadays I mostly make dubstep with emphasis on good melodies and chord progressions.
SoundCloud: soundcloud.com/ollaxe
Twitter: twitter.com/ollaxe
Discord server: dis.gd/tK7uRnc
I'm also on Spotify. Search "OllAxe" and you'll find me.

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Re: YOU CAN'T FIND ME

Postby MrKyurem » Sun Jun 28, 2015 4:40 pm

ollaxe wrote:Not bad, but also not great. I don't really have any new critisism to offer, but you're at least getting better. :)

MrKyurem wrote:also it's really nice to not be banned for giving criticism here, unlike scratch
Did they ban you? /:o Tiny text FTW!!!


Not only that, but when I sarcastically said "they don't even know what IP bans are," they banned FAMICOMFOREVER for the atrocious things I did, including giving constructive criticism and saying "damn!"

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Re: YOU CAN'T FIND ME

Postby ollaxe » Sun Jun 28, 2015 5:16 pm

MrKyurem wrote:
ollaxe wrote:Not bad, but also not great. I don't really have any new critisism to offer, but you're at least getting better. :)

MrKyurem wrote:also it's really nice to not be banned for giving criticism here, unlike scratch
Did they ban you? /:o Tiny text FTW!!!


Not only that, but when I sarcastically said "they don't even know what IP bans are," they banned FAMICOMFOREVER for the atrocious things I did, including giving constructive criticism and saying "damn!"

Wait, they banned FamicomForever for the "horrible stuff that you said" too? That is low, man.

I sincerely hope you see those quotation marks.

BTW, your text was so small I literally thougt you wrote nothing XD
Last edited by ollaxe on Sun Jun 28, 2015 5:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Hi! I'm not really active here anymore but I still make music. Nowadays I mostly make dubstep with emphasis on good melodies and chord progressions.
SoundCloud: soundcloud.com/ollaxe
Twitter: twitter.com/ollaxe
Discord server: dis.gd/tK7uRnc
I'm also on Spotify. Search "OllAxe" and you'll find me.


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