Enter the Castle

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Squidsquif
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Enter the Castle

Postby Squidsquif » Wed Jan 03, 2018 11:22 pm

Hello! This is my first time posting a song on the forums, so I'm pretty excited.
This is a song that I made up over winter break. I wanted it to be a level theme for some sort of evil castle, but you guys tell me what you think. I'm gonna change the title of the song when I can think of a good one.
Constructive criticism is always welcomed! :D

Note: You need version 0.5 of Famitracker to play this!
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The Caller
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Re: Enter the Castle

Postby The Caller » Sat Jan 06, 2018 10:36 pm

Hello. Welcome to the forums.

I must say, this is a very good song. Definitely one to leave a good first impression here on the forums. It's well-written and the FDS channel is also very well thought out. The only thing I can nitpick about is the Pulse channels. I think you should tone them down a bit, in several parts of the song. The problem with striking such high notes, and echoed notes at that, is that it can get pretty ear grating real fast. But apart from that, this is solid.

Good work. And I do hope to see more of your work here in the forums.

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Re: Enter the Castle

Postby Squidsquif » Mon Jan 08, 2018 5:01 am

Hey, The Caller.
Thank you so much for your feedback! The speakers on my computer aren't the best, so I never noticed how the Pulse channels could seem a bit pitchy. I'll definitely keep the tone thing mind though. Once again, thank you :P
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