Starry Night - My first song on FamiTracker

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Monkena
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Starry Night - My first song on FamiTracker

Postby Monkena » Sun Feb 04, 2018 3:58 pm

Just as the title says, this is my first song in FamiTracker, please let me know your opinions and critics about it!
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Re: Starry Night - My first song on FamiTracker

Postby Teuthida » Sun Feb 04, 2018 4:22 pm

Pretty nice and jazzy first song! I liked your use of samples and the drum beat that comes in later on. However, the song gets very repetitive after a while; that loud and expressive intro becomes boring after the first few times. You might want to also consider using chords other than minor ones.
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Re: Starry Night - My first song on FamiTracker

Postby Monkena » Sun Feb 04, 2018 4:56 pm

Teuthida wrote:Pretty nice and jazzy first song! I liked your use of samples and the drum beat that comes in later on. However, the song gets very repetitive after a while; that loud and expressive intro becomes boring after the first few times. You might want to also consider using chords other than minor ones.

great idea! i'll work on it later, thanks
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