Success Attempt! : D

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Sacara
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Success Attempt! : D

Postby Sacara » Sat May 02, 2015 4:18 am

I named this piece "Calling", the chords especially reminded me of something similar of Batman (Warner Bros. animated). This is my first successful original piece on Famitracker, or anything like it for that matter, XD
Short, but, I like it.
Feel free to construct and comment. : )
Thanks.

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Working on Robotech soundtrack covers, let's see how this goes. =]

mtmbTomSmith
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Re: Success Attempt! : D

Postby mtmbTomSmith » Sat May 09, 2015 4:01 pm

I was surprised that the first chord sounds nice, considering there's a D and a D# at the same time.

I will say that you might have accidentally set the sawtooth channel's voice to 03, which is the same as setting it to 01, which makes it twice as loud as everything else.

In fact the whole thing is super super loud.

I tweaked it a tiny bit, what do you think :?
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Re: Success Attempt! : D

Postby Roflo » Sat May 09, 2015 5:07 pm

mtmbTomSmith wrote:I was surprised that the first chord sounds nice, considering there's a D and a D# at the same time.

Actually it's D#Maj7 :mrgreen:
Nice progression throughout, now it's time to add a melody.

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Re: Success Attempt! : D

Postby footprints420 » Tue May 12, 2015 6:18 am

Mellow-ass chords, I'd love to see this expanded on
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