run of the cricket (2A03)

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arethere
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run of the cricket (2A03)

Postby arethere » Sun May 20, 2018 11:02 pm

Hello friends,
This song is inspired by the Shantae Gameboy OST i listened to the other day.

Some issues I have with it:
- The melodies are pretty random and not memorable
- The structure and everything is very block-ish (essentially just 2 sections on repeat)
- I didn't make Triangle sound like a great Lead Instrument. It's just too quiet compared to everything else
- Drums and everything else are pretty boring
- I asked some random dude on Omegle for a title and this is what he told me to name it. run of the cricket - I don't even know what that means

Please offer criticism, tell me your least favorite thing about it, say hello, anything really

(Unfortunately I made this in OCC-Famitracker but I used nsf import to ... import the nsf so regular Famitracker can open the file.)
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dougjoe2e
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Re: run of the cricket (2A03)

Postby dougjoe2e » Fri Aug 17, 2018 4:16 am

I thought this was pretty fun, nice bouncy little beat. I think the switch between the triangle and pulse 2 for the melody works just fine.


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