A short loop

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bidy2014@web.de
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A short loop

Postby bidy2014@web.de » Sat Jun 02, 2018 5:27 pm

This is not that special, but since I like it myself (which is not always the case) I thought maybe other People would like it too, so I'm uploading this now.
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stewboy
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Re: A short loop

Postby stewboy » Sun Jul 01, 2018 6:37 pm

Frame 05, with the arpeggiation in the melody, was very welcome. In fact overall the strength of this track IMO is that you do find interesting ways to vary the texture while keeping the same chord progression. That being said, the track is otherwise fairly predictable and too rhythmically 'safe' if that makes sense. Some variation in the chords, drums, or harmonies would add a lot.


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