Secrets (2A03)

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bidy2014@web.de
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Secrets (2A03)

Postby bidy2014@web.de » Sat Dec 29, 2018 7:41 pm

I think it's been quite a while since the last time I uploaded something here, but now I'm back I guess. I hope someone likes it. Oh and also, please tell me if somethings wrong with the file or the module or something else.
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Re: Secrets (2A03)

Postby Psionic » Tue Jan 01, 2019 4:18 am

Your transition from Frame 3 to 4 is very dry and Instrument 08 abruptly stops when I feel like it shouldn't. In my opinion, you could rectify this with a fast volume decay in the instrument. It's a good start.
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Re: Secrets (2A03)

Postby Squidsquif » Tue Jan 01, 2019 5:07 am

Psionic wrote:Your transition from Frame 3 to 4 is very dry and Instrument 08 abruptly stops when I feel like it shouldn't.
I'm going to agree. Pulse 2 stops too suddenly and is a bit jarring. Also, everything seems so loud. Mostly the arps in Pulse 1; they are kind of burying the melody. Lowering the volume a bit would help tremendously :). Everything else sounds great!
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Re: Secrets (2A03)

Postby bidy2014@web.de » Tue Jan 01, 2019 3:23 pm

Squidsquif wrote:
Psionic wrote:Your transition from Frame 3 to 4 is very dry and Instrument 08 abruptly stops when I feel like it shouldn't.
I'm going to agree. Pulse 2 stops too suddenly and is a bit jarring. Also, everything seems so loud. Mostly the arps in Pulse 1; they are kind of burying the melody. Lowering the volume a bit would help tremendously :). Everything else sounds great!


Ok... Maybe like this?
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