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Secrets (2A03)

Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2018 7:41 pm
by bidy2014@web.de
I think it's been quite a while since the last time I uploaded something here, but now I'm back I guess. I hope someone likes it. Oh and also, please tell me if somethings wrong with the file or the module or something else.

Re: Secrets (2A03)

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2019 4:18 am
by Psionic
Your transition from Frame 3 to 4 is very dry and Instrument 08 abruptly stops when I feel like it shouldn't. In my opinion, you could rectify this with a fast volume decay in the instrument. It's a good start.

Re: Secrets (2A03)

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2019 5:07 am
by Squidsquif
Psionic wrote:Your transition from Frame 3 to 4 is very dry and Instrument 08 abruptly stops when I feel like it shouldn't.
I'm going to agree. Pulse 2 stops too suddenly and is a bit jarring. Also, everything seems so loud. Mostly the arps in Pulse 1; they are kind of burying the melody. Lowering the volume a bit would help tremendously :). Everything else sounds great!

Re: Secrets (2A03)

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2019 3:23 pm
by bidy2014@web.de
Squidsquif wrote:
Psionic wrote:Your transition from Frame 3 to 4 is very dry and Instrument 08 abruptly stops when I feel like it shouldn't.
I'm going to agree. Pulse 2 stops too suddenly and is a bit jarring. Also, everything seems so loud. Mostly the arps in Pulse 1; they are kind of burying the melody. Lowering the volume a bit would help tremendously :). Everything else sounds great!


Ok... Maybe like this?