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Whole Wheatley
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First Forum Post

Postby Whole Wheatley » Tue Jul 14, 2015 4:43 am

This is my first song I've ever shared on the forum. It's very simplistic and still needs some work (the rhythm is very repetitive), but I think it's pretty enjoyable as is. I don't know if I'll ever post an update for it.
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Rarest_lizard038
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Re: First Forum Post

Postby Rarest_lizard038 » Tue Jul 14, 2015 6:12 pm

The Follin is strong with this one...


but seriously this is a good song for a first post! Keep up the good work : )

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Whole Wheatley
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Re: First Forum Post

Postby Whole Wheatley » Tue Jul 14, 2015 9:12 pm

Thanks. Now that I think about it, it kinda sounds like Silver Surfer (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-J0H5ah1G7A).

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Re: First Forum Post

Postby MiniMacro » Wed Jul 15, 2015 4:57 pm

"simplistic"
You, sir, are incredibly mistaken.
This is very good.
wow this is total BS
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Re: First Forum Post

Postby Radnyx » Fri Jul 17, 2015 12:37 am

I like it, and the only suggestion I'd make for the FTM is to lower the volume of the leads. It's pretty loud, so lowering the pulse channels will A. make it sound more pleasant and B. let you hear the triangle better.

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Re: First Forum Post

Postby iYamWhatIYam » Fri Jul 17, 2015 1:44 am

Dude. My first song used several instruments, and sounded worse than this. You used one, and it sounds Silver Surfer-esque. Great first song.
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Whole Wheatley
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Re: First Forum Post

Postby Whole Wheatley » Fri Jul 17, 2015 11:35 am

This isn't actually my first song, just the first I've posted on the forum. My first was far worse than this, trust me.

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Re: First Forum Post

Postby sirocyl » Wed Jul 22, 2015 1:14 am

Mmmm, better than GLaTEN-free. ^^

I like it, it's a pretty good single-instrument composition. Great percussion, too.
Was your aim to use only one instrument in this song? Or is it just coincidental?

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Re: First Forum Post

Postby Livoh773 » Wed Jul 22, 2015 5:02 pm

Is not that repetitive for me, guess if you think about it as a song itself, it is of course. But as a videogame track, it loops good and does not sound that repetitive. Also, I think is kind of fun, give me a fooling feel.