Fortress stage theme 2A03

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H_Mister
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Fortress stage theme 2A03

Postby H_Mister » Mon May 11, 2015 7:40 pm

This is the third version of this track as I had some help on what I could be improved. And now ladies and gentlemen I give "The Fortress of Calamity" (Oh and by the way please give feedback on what can be improve or whether I should create a remix to this theme thank you :mrgreen: )
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mtmbTomSmith
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Re: Fortress stage theme 2A03

Postby mtmbTomSmith » Mon May 11, 2015 11:38 pm

Pretty solid !megaman track

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Re: Fortress stage theme 2A03

Postby TheMudkipMaster12 » Tue May 12, 2015 1:23 am

I like it! It sounds like a Dr. Wily stage but also has its own unique feel to it. Nice job!
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Re: Fortress stage theme 2A03

Postby zero the fox » Fri May 22, 2015 12:07 am

I may be mistaken... but there might be some clashing notes at some points... forgive me if i'm wrong... ;-;

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Re: Fortress stage theme 2A03

Postby Threxx » Fri May 22, 2015 12:27 am

This is actually a fairly well composed song! Seems like it would work for a later fortress stage.

I will concur with ztf on the note clashing, it seems readily audible in some places. In addition, I think you should try reworking frames 06-07, it's a very jarring style transition and it kinda throws off the progression of the song. Maybe consider cutting this out and just jumping to the section after?

Otherwise, this is a nice start!