[2A03] Cave Story - Mischievous Robot

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[2A03] Cave Story - Mischievous Robot

Postby Lum » Mon Aug 29, 2016 12:45 am

Hey everyone! Here's a little cover I did recently. Enjoy!

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Re: [2A03] Cave Story - Mischievous Robot

Postby Teuthida » Mon Aug 29, 2016 1:07 pm

This is good! However, there are two things I would change. For one, the last four notes of pulse 2 in frame 11 are all C#6's. Also, I think that Pulse 1 should focus more on the countermelody rather than just the beeps.
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