[N163]Battle Against a True Hero

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VGT
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[N163]Battle Against a True Hero

Postby VGT » Sat Mar 25, 2017 12:00 pm

I can't believe I am still making songs from Undertale......
Part 1E-25 sounds a little weird. But I think it's not that weird......
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Re: [N163]Battle Against a True Hero

Postby Stratelier » Tue Mar 28, 2017 12:30 am

I agree, the latter segment of the song does sound weird. For frames 25 onward specifically, it's because all your staccatos (note cuts) line up perfectly across almost all channels, so instead of having a fast-paced flowing feel (like the original) it feels choppy. Maybe instead of doing note cuts here just alternate the volume to quiet? Try things...

Frames 1D and 35 are also missing some prominent chords.

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Re: [N163]Battle Against a True Hero

Postby beachbum811 » Tue Apr 04, 2017 1:09 am

Yeah, flesh out the chords.
Great job on the baseline though.
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