There are some things I'd take issue with, which are basically the sound of the snare (it just sounds really...simple. Too simple) and the pitch bend at the end of the song which seem to happen too late for both of them.
Just for reference on that bending part: https://youtu.be/-LYB7iLZNWE?t=99
(if the time stamp doesn't work, skip forward to ~1:40).
That's my two cents. There are some other things I'd do differently but those are too hard to put into words for me.
You're doing good work, but you can definitely do better. Keep it going!