[0CC][VRC6+S5B]Super Mario Galaxy - Buoy Base Galaxy

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LGA1150
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[0CC][VRC6+S5B]Super Mario Galaxy - Buoy Base Galaxy

Postby LGA1150 » Fri Mar 09, 2018 3:40 am

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Teuthida
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Re: [0CC][VRC6+S5B]Super Mario Galaxy - Buoy Base Galaxy

Postby Teuthida » Sat Mar 10, 2018 5:43 am

For the most part, I'm a fan of this cover. All the notes seem accurate, and I like your choice of instrumentation. However, I think that your mixing needs improvement. You start everything off at near-maximum volume, so there's nowhere for the song to go after the beginning. I would try starting off a lot lower and getting louder from there. Additionally, you're not getting a lot out of your channels. I couldn't find a single time when you were actually using all 11 of your channels at once. This could easily be collapsed into a VRC6+MMC5 or N163-5 song without losing anything.
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