Jay Letourneau - Heroes of the city

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Fretzone
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Jay Letourneau - Heroes of the city

Postby Fretzone » Wed May 18, 2016 4:16 am

I was wondering if you guys could give me some tips with what i could do to make this sound better, I dont know if its the dpcm or something else but there some patterns with a lot going on and i dont know there a lot of noise of some kind , something is bugging me in term of sound when i listen to this with headphone. thanks
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B8Bit
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Re: Jay Letourneau - Heroes of the city

Postby B8Bit » Thu May 19, 2016 12:34 am

Not sure why no comments, but this rocks. I don't hear noise? Maybe you're over-analyzing. Sounds good!
This could totally be in a Contra game.

Fretzone
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Re: Jay Letourneau - Heroes of the city

Postby Fretzone » Thu May 19, 2016 1:34 am

Thanks man , yeah maybe i do over-analyze it, I just wanted to know what the others thought of it :)

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Re: Jay Letourneau - Heroes of the city

Postby thecowinspace » Fri May 20, 2016 1:41 am

I think it sounds great. The only slight complaint I have is the end, where you could probably put down a sort of end flourish to make it sound better and, if you plan on making it loop, make it tie into the first part so then, once done, the single period of just one high note doesn't grow awkward because it has an ending bit. I dunno, it's just my two cents. I'm only starting out really, so I'm not that good in comparison to your composition. Great though, I love almost every part of it.
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Fretzone
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Re: Jay Letourneau - Heroes of the city

Postby Fretzone » Sun May 22, 2016 4:48 pm

Thanks man , yeah I know i'didn't remember that i let the note rang like that. I was probably working on another part and i erased it and forgot it like that

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Torowin
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Re: Jay Letourneau - Heroes of the city

Postby Torowin » Tue May 24, 2016 6:32 am

jeez this is great. I wish I could do transitions this good.

Fretzone
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Re: Jay Letourneau - Heroes of the city

Postby Fretzone » Fri May 27, 2016 4:54 pm

Thanks Torowin :) but dont worry , the transitions , its always the hardest thing to pull off.

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Re: Jay Letourneau - Heroes of the city

Postby sleepless » Sat May 28, 2016 9:51 pm

The lead sounds a little quiet near the end but otherwise this is very good