Wierd Stranger (MMC5)

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bidy2014@web.de
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Wierd Stranger (MMC5)

Postby bidy2014@web.de » Thu Oct 06, 2016 5:22 pm

Woohoo! I made a new soundtrack! Aaaand I think it is good. But what do YOU think? I wanna know, so up there is something to give me points!! Please rate fairly. And before I forget: The file was made in the famitracker beta 5 (I don't think theres any famitracker user who doesn't use the beta but I want to be sure noone gets confused).
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I don't think the title fits good to the music, but I'm not very creative at giving things names.
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"I'm...wierd." - describing myself, November 2018
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Re: Wierd Stranger (MMC5)

Postby meinerHeld » Thu Oct 06, 2016 6:08 pm

Nice noise. Dope subterranean bass. High tech low-life 4eva

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Re: Wierd Stranger (MMC5)

Postby Tobikomi » Thu Oct 06, 2016 11:01 pm

I like the tune, but it's repetitive at times.
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Re: Wierd Stranger (MMC5)

Postby bidy2014@web.de » Fri Oct 07, 2016 3:02 pm

Tobikomi wrote:I like the tune, but it's repetitive at times.

Yeah, youre right about that. I'm not as creative as i wish I would be with that stuff. :? But I started touching instruments only half a year ago, so I'm happy I made it this far. BUT: You're right it IS a lot more repitive than I wanted it to be. :? :)
"I'm...wierd." - describing myself, November 2018
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Re: Wierd Stranger (MMC5)

Postby bidy2014@web.de » Fri Oct 07, 2016 3:04 pm

meinerHeld wrote:Nice noise. Dope subterranean bass. High tech low-life 4eva

Wow, thanks! :) I would have never exepcted an Answer like THAT!
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Re: Wierd Stranger (MMC5)

Postby meinerHeld » Fri Oct 07, 2016 5:21 pm

bidy2014@web.de wrote:
meinerHeld wrote:Nice noise. Dope subterranean bass. High tech low-life 4eva

Wow, thanks! :) I would have never exepcted an Answer like THAT!


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Re: Wierd Stranger (MMC5)

Postby bidy2014@web.de » Fri Oct 07, 2016 6:45 pm

bidy2014@web.de wrote:
Tobikomi wrote:I like the tune, but it's repetitive at times.

Yeah, youre right about that. I'm not as creative as i wish I would be with that stuff. :? But I started touching instruments only half a year ago, so I'm happy I made it this far. BUT: You're right it IS a lot more repititive than I wanted it to be. :? :)
"I'm...wierd." - describing myself, November 2018
Oh and if you're bored you can send something to this:
[URL] B14music@web.de

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Re: Wierd Stranger (MMC5)

Postby Roflo » Fri Oct 07, 2016 7:10 pm

Actually not bad, I like the sound design. It indeed is repetitive, but I'm sure this can be fixed easily.

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Re: Wierd Stranger (MMC5)

Postby Joblez_I » Fri Oct 07, 2016 7:17 pm

it's repetitive and could use some better instrumentation (I would recommend dropping the V01-V04 and just stick to using only one of those) but with a bit of recomposition this should be fixed no problem.
I like the chips and the tunes
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