Do you know what I'm thinking? [2A03 + VRC6]

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Sky Yoshi
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Do you know what I'm thinking? [2A03 + VRC6]

Postby Sky Yoshi » Wed Dec 21, 2016 1:17 pm

This is a sorta sequel to We use(d) to be Friends and it's similar.
But this time, it's happier.
This time, the song is based on Pikotaro's Neo-Sunglass instead of Joe Inoue's Closer.
Pikotaro because... you can imagine.
Do you know what I'm thinking.ftm
Made with 0.4.6
(285.55 KiB) Downloaded 83 times

Anyway, I am considering to make an Album containing many of my original songs including this too.
What do you think?
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Re: Do you know what I'm thinking? [2A03 + VRC6]

Postby Maniraptor muzika » Thu Dec 22, 2016 6:32 am

Ooh, cool! A three-verse song in famitracker! I love it. The intro has a very similar feeling to A Town Called Malice by The Jam, and since a town called malice is a good song, you could say it's a good thing.

also eek, frame 14 sounds way too similar to let it go
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Re: Do you know what I'm thinking? [2A03 + VRC6]

Postby Sky Yoshi » Thu Dec 22, 2016 6:45 am

Maniraptor muzika wrote:Frame 14 sounds way too similar to let it go


What!? Okay, I think it's a coincidence. lmao Sorry! It's not based on Let it go. But, thank you for the Comment!
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Re: Do you know what I'm thinking? [2A03 + VRC6]

Postby Joblez_I » Thu Dec 22, 2016 4:21 pm

Every piece you write showcases the amount of time, effort, and dedication that goes into it. I can't think of anything to fault this piece on in the slightest. Beautifully composed, good instrumentation, long and very diverse, and overall just evident of the amount of heart you put into writing your pieces. Happy, fun, and weirdly nostalgic all rolled up into one well-made piece. Excellent work.
I like the chips and the tunes
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Re: Do you know what I'm thinking? [2A03 + VRC6]

Postby Sky Yoshi » Fri Dec 23, 2016 8:56 am

Wow! WHat a compliment! THank you very much! I like your comment!
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