Some unfinished stuff. . .

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Redscarf
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Some unfinished stuff. . .

Postby Redscarf » Sat Jul 11, 2015 5:08 pm

Hey guys these are just a couple of songs that I started and planned on expanding upon but could never find a way to do so. I think putting them up here and getting some feedback would help me determine whether or not I should go on to finish them. Also if you want you can edit them however you like.
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Going Forth.ftm
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Teart Nights.ftm
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No Titles.ftm
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Chorus1a.ftm
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James_S
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Re: Some unfinished stuff. . .

Postby James_S » Sun Jul 12, 2015 3:51 am

these are pretty amazing. if you could finish teart nights, i would love that.
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Neonchiptune
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Re: Some unfinished stuff. . .

Postby Neonchiptune » Sun Jul 12, 2015 4:40 am

I have to agree with FamicomForever, here. These are great.
Although my personal favorite was No Titles. I'm in love with that composition <33.
Keep it up, dude!

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Ahornberg
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Re: Some unfinished stuff. . .

Postby Ahornberg » Sun Jul 12, 2015 9:21 am

all are worth to be finished ;)

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Re: Some unfinished stuff. . .

Postby Redscarf » Sun Jul 12, 2015 9:56 pm

Thanks guys for the replies, you don't know how much it means to me, usually when I'm working on a composition I beat myself up so badly that I just never end up finishing them. Also if guys have any tips or tricks that you use while composing I'd love it if you could share them with me. Thanks!

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Potentialing
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Re: Some unfinished stuff. . .

Postby Potentialing » Sun Jul 12, 2015 11:16 pm

Hey, I really like these! I think there's a lot of potential in these tracks, but I think you should try to check the notes you're using on your bass for each chord: it's actually very important for writing progressions!

Also, I decided to have a little fun with "Teart Nights.ftm", so I attached an edit I made of it. I hope you like it!
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Last edited by Potentialing on Mon Jul 13, 2015 10:03 am, edited 1 time in total.

Redscarf
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Re: Some unfinished stuff. . .

Postby Redscarf » Mon Jul 13, 2015 3:19 am

Wow Potentialing, that's some smooth stuff right there, i'll try to keep check on my bass notes.