Forgotten Areas (0.5.0 beta 5)

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Forgotten Areas (0.5.0 beta 5)

Postby MiniMacro » Wed Aug 12, 2015 6:47 pm

In the midst of the 5 covers I'm making for a contest, I decided to write a fun little song.




Is this short little 2A03 song any better than my previous songs?
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Re: Forgotten Areas (0.5.0 beta 5)

Postby retrodpc » Wed Aug 12, 2015 7:01 pm

The only part that is any better is the intro frame.
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Re: Forgotten Areas (0.5.0 beta 5)

Postby MiniMacro » Wed Aug 12, 2015 8:02 pm

Bump!
What's wrong with the rest?
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Re: Forgotten Areas (0.5.0 beta 5)

Postby Threxx » Wed Aug 12, 2015 8:08 pm

MiniMacro wrote:Bump!
What's wrong with the rest?


A complete lack of harmony or any musical understanding.

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Re: Forgotten Areas (0.5.0 beta 5)

Postby snowolf » Wed Aug 12, 2015 8:17 pm

I like your tracks, it's always a good way to train myself.

So here is an edit of your track I made because I'm bored and I do not have anything better to do.
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Re: Forgotten Areas (0.5.0 beta 5)

Postby MiniMacro » Wed Aug 12, 2015 8:20 pm

WOW!
snowolf, this edit is really good!
I can't believe how good that is!
I will say, that I don't really care for the last 2 frames lack of my original Pulse 2 pattern. But otherwise, nice one!
What name did you use on the old forums?
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Re: Forgotten Areas (0.5.0 beta 5)

Postby snowolf » Wed Aug 12, 2015 8:27 pm

MiniMacro wrote:WOW!
snowolf, this edit is really good!
I can't believe how good that is!
I will say, that I don't really care for the last 2 frames lack of my original Pulse 2 pattern. But otherwise, nice one!
What name did you use on the old forums?


I'm here since july, so I'm a total newbie here.

If you want any explanation about any of my changes, feel free to ask. But I belive I'm not the first one to advice you...

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Re: Forgotten Areas (0.5.0 beta 5)

Postby retrodpc » Wed Aug 12, 2015 9:31 pm

You are much more in a position to advise him than he is to advise anyone else.
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Re: Forgotten Areas (0.5.0 beta 5)

Postby James_S » Thu Aug 13, 2015 4:01 am

>listen to intro
did smallbig finally learn how to make music?!
>frame 01
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also
listen to the dcpm on frames 01+ and then listen to this, i find it strangely familiar and quite funny:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T850_HngrBw

and then listen to pulse 1 frame 04 then listen to this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
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