Super Mario 3D Land on Super Mario Bros Rhythm

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davidlikescheese1000
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Super Mario 3D Land on Super Mario Bros Rhythm

Postby davidlikescheese1000 » Tue May 30, 2017 2:40 pm

So this wasn't long. I had to go through chord progressions I know from SM3DL, But the modulation was the worst part cause I don't want the modulation to be dull and no pizzazz so that was the best I can make it. Anyways, I'm still working more of the song, Like add some Super Mario 3D world, but as of now, don't say "OMG YOU DID SUCH A PERFECT JOB" or "BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH YOU DID GREAT" cause I want to be judged on how you guys think what could make it better than now.
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Re: Super Mario 3D Land on Super Mario Bros Rhythm

Postby beachbum811 » Wed May 31, 2017 1:15 am

The first chord in the B section sounds a little weird.
It would make more sense to me if that one frame was F major
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Re: Super Mario 3D Land on Super Mario Bros Rhythm

Postby davidlikescheese1000 » Sat Jun 03, 2017 5:49 am

beachbum811 wrote:The first chord in the B section sounds a little weird.
It would make more sense to me if that one frame was F major


So F, C, Dm, in first part of B and then Am, F, and then F#aug in second part of B?
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Re: Super Mario 3D Land on Super Mario Bros Rhythm

Postby beachbum811 » Sun Jun 04, 2017 2:27 pm

I checked the actual music, and if I were to guess, I'd say F, C, G/D, C, F, F#dim, D, G.
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Re: Super Mario 3D Land on Super Mario Bros Rhythm

Postby davidlikescheese1000 » Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:12 pm

So I added a C part. But for some reason, I'm not sure about frame 20. It's supposed to be the pitch from SM3DL but the rhythm of SMB. Any help to the C part will be helpful


I checked the actual music, and if I were to guess, I'd say F, C, G/D, C, F, F#dim, D, G.

Haven't changed the 2nd half of B yet but yeah.
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Re: Super Mario 3D Land on Super Mario Bros Rhythm

Postby LGA1150 » Wed Jun 14, 2017 12:23 pm

Fixed tempo bug and corrected a note in triangle pattern 12.
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Re: Super Mario 3D Land on Super Mario Bros Rhythm

Postby davidlikescheese1000 » Thu Jun 15, 2017 8:03 am

LGA1150 wrote:Fixed tempo bug and corrected a note in triangle pattern 12.


lmao thanks for trying to help and fixing a note.

As for the tempo, I don't want to be too picky, I'd say it's not really a noticeable difference, unless theres a tempo difference that you can spot easily like https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rjyQg5pqGGA and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HTb7eV6MIlw, one of them is my videos, really old, and cringy video :|
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