Suggestions for Song (2A03)

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dpplasma
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Suggestions for Song (2A03)

Postby dpplasma » Fri Aug 03, 2018 2:43 pm

I recently made a song to be used as a boss battle of sorts, and would be interested to hear suggestions from you all. I like the melody and I think I did a good job of keeping the rhythm of the noise channel varied but I'm not happy with what's currently in the triangle channel and I think the instruments I used could use some work. If you could listen to this and let me know what you think, I would greatly appreciate it!

Thanks.
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Re: Suggestions for Song (2A03)

Postby bidy2014@web.de » Sun Aug 12, 2018 11:59 am

Well, i'm not that good of a music critic but maybe this little edit helps? I hope so.
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