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renegade723
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Rush

Postby renegade723 » Mon Aug 13, 2018 5:31 am

Was trying to make a faster song but I don't think it goes anywhere interesting. Any suggestions?
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arethere
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Re: Rush

Postby arethere » Mon Sep 10, 2018 2:12 pm

I like seventh chords. Seems like you are heading in a good direction with making music as far as I am concerned. I don't think it was uninteresting. Frame 3 was a nice change of instrumentation.
That said, I am not sure some of the dissonances are intentional. For example in frame 05 you have a pretty irregular second chord in your progression. You've got a lot of minor seconds and tritones in there. If this is the effect you want, then that's fine but if you were not sure what chord to use, maybe try a B Minor 9 (B D F# A C#). You can voice chords in different ways as well.
Overall you did a good job.

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Re: Rush

Postby Esot-Guild » Tue Sep 11, 2018 3:00 pm

Nice job! That's something I like to hear as I woke up not a long time ago ha ha! Continue your work!
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