T-T-T (Twisted Train Trip)

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T-T-T (Twisted Train Trip)

Postby Esot-Guild » Tue Sep 11, 2018 2:54 pm

T-T-T - Please leave a comment :D
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Hi! My name is Martin Chiasson Duguay, if you like in what I'm doing, please contact me, just a simple comment will make my day! :)



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Re: T-T-T (Twisted Train Trip)

Postby arethere » Wed Sep 26, 2018 8:15 pm

Not bad, not bad. I like what I've heard from you so far in general. To me it sounds like you are treating Famitracker like an orchestra if that makes sense. I just get a classical vibe from your compositions. You don't feel like following more contemporary simple song structure. At least that's my impression!

About this one...It goes lots of places. Some of the sections are so different they might as well be 3 distinctly different songs but that's not necessarily a bad thing. The noise channel is a bit bland in my opinion. I think it could use a dedicated bass instrument that fills out the low end. Also maybe experiment more with duty cycles. You can bring out a lot just by varying those.
Because I wanted to practice arranging and I liked the song here is an arrangement putting my criticism into practice. Let me know if anything I said resonates with you.
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Re: T-T-T (Twisted Train Trip)

Postby J.D.P. » Mon Nov 26, 2018 4:45 am

oh that is really cool oAo'